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Hear No Evil, 1B/6, Dean, Sam, Gen, PG-13

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Disclaimer: Ownership is a fantasy we have about the corners of our lives that sustain us. The muse belongs to no one but its creator. Which is certainly not me. More's the pity.
Spoilers: Season 2, set after 2.15, Tall Tales and before 2.16, Roadkill. Anything prior to the first appearance of that darn Trickster is fair game.
Summary: The trickster left the brothers in need of a clean hunt. An explosion turns a routine spirit hunt into anything but clean. Dean must deal with the ramifications, while Sam tries to finish the job and help his brother pick up the pieces. 



"There it is," Sam calls out, causing Dean to jump free of his memories. "Lynch Heights."

"What's… Slaughter Beach?" Dean asks, pulling off the highway, not surprised that there's not another car in sight. They were square in the middle of nowhere, heading nowhere, leaving nowhere. At the intersection of been there, done that.

Sam shrugged, sucking in his bottom lip. "Dunno," he glanced sideways at Dean. "Sounds kinda like our type a place, though, huh?"

"Dude, that's just sad," Dean replied, but felt his mouth curl up into a smile regardless, knowing truth when he heard it. He winced as the Impala screamed at him as he accelerated through a green light at the base of the exit. "Damn, I hate that sound."

"Tomorrow, we find a garage."

Dean nodded. "I get dibs on the first shower," he said.

"Hey! You got the first shower last night," Sam protested.

"Gotta be quick 'round here, Sammy," Dean grinned, turning into the parking lot of the first motel he came to, a Vacancy sign blinking in yellow neon beneath an image of a fisherman cloaked in a rain slicker battling waves in an effort to reach a lighthouse. The bulb in the lighthouse was an eye-searing blue. "You check us in."

"Which card you wanna use?" Sam asked.

"Uh," Dean reached into his back pocket, came up empty, frowned, swung his arm over the seat and snagged his leather jacket, then retrieved a gray Visa from the inside pocket. "How 'bout Ian Willis?"

Sam snatched the card from Dean's fingers. "How's Ian's credit?"

"So far, so good," Dean grinned, bouncing his eyebrows. See the mask, not the pain. See what I show, not what I feel.

Sam shoved the door open with his elbow, the familiar creak covering his soft chuckle. Dean rubbed his neck, feeling the knots there that he was never without, and watched his brother cross in front of the Impala's headlights, the beams hitting Sam's knees and catching his bare knuckles as his hands swung loosely at his sides.

You gotta promise me…

Dean shook his head, the unbidden echo of Sam's drunken plea filtering between the cracks in his wall.

Promise me…

Dean closed his eyes, pinching the bridge of his nose, pulling a breath into his lungs and working up the mantra to banish memories. Promising Sam that he would kill him—echoing the order John had left with him—had been the only way he'd been able to quiet his desperate brother.

His brother staring up at him with the same large eyes, the same unseeing stare. Reaching for him with the same clumsy grip, trembling with the same fear: that he wouldn't be able to get out. Get away. Get free. Of danger. Of his destiny. Of evil.

Dean jumped when the knock of knuckles against glass broke into his dark thoughts.

"Got the last double," Sam called through the closed door.

Dean pocketed the keys, pulling the Bowie knife from its sheath beneath the seat, and stepped from the Impala, heading around to the trunk with the slam of the driver's door punching the silence of the night.

"Weapons?" Sam asked, lifting the trunk lid and shifting the bow and arrows over to grab his duffel.

"Nah," Dean shook his head. "We got what we need."

Sam tipped his chin up in a nod, waited until Dean grabbed his bag, then closed the trunk. They turned as one, heading for the room.

"You better not use all the hot water," Sam grumbled as he crossed the darkened room, automatically heading for the bed furthest from the door.

Dean watched him, pulling his knowing smile inside, tucking it away where it was safe, and worked his lips around the expected snarky comeback.

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Coffee was intoxicating.

He could clearly understand his brother's addiction to the beverage, and would go to his grave with silence his one marker of testimony to the same. Dean enjoyed giving him a hard time about his half-caf, decaffeinated mocha with a twist of lemon too much for Sam to burst his bubble and inform him that cream and sugar did it for him just fine, thanks.

Sam slid his fingers down the grainy edge of the local newspaper, wrapping the dull drone of the coffee-house voices around him like a warm blanket, comfortable in the familiarity of strangers. When nowhere was home, home was everywhere. He had yet to find a small town without a local coffee shop. He had yet to find a local coffee shop without it's share of hurried, gasping gossip, newspapers printed on frayed recycled paper, and harried baristas anxious for eleven a.m. and the end of the morning rush.

Listening to the hum of Lynch Heights in the morning, Sam scanned the newspaper, knowing what he was looking for, eyes like a search engine. Unexplained, locked room, no murder weapon, strange noises… they all signaled something worth looking into.

And they needed something to look into. The ala had been a fluke. A chance. One in a million. They hadn't even meant to stop in Delaware. But it had effectively taken them past the pain of I was awake for some of it and through the ridiculous tangle of you're too precious for this world into a moment where they were once again side-by-side fighting evil. Once again hunting things. Once again saving people.

"Get you something else?"

Sam looked up, surprised, as the hard bite of the Eastern accent bounced against his ears. "Sorry, what?"

"Where're you from, honey?" The middle-aged woman, standing with hip cocked, glass carafe balanced in her gold-ring adorned right hand, studied Sam with shrewd brown eyes, pale lips pursed.

"Uh… Texas," Sam drawled, needing more of the beverage she held hostage before he could come up with a better story.

"Sure and I knew you weren't from nearby," she nodded. "Coffee?"

"Please. Thank you, ma'am," Sam ticked up his smile, feeling his dimples dig into her defenses.

"Don't you 'ma'am' me, now. You passing through?"

Sam swallowed, suddenly missing Dean's smooth charm and slow eyes. "On a road trip," he said. "With my brother."

"Your brother as pretty as you?" she asked, smiling slyly.

Sam blinked. "Uh…"

"Never you mind, sweetie," she patted his hand. "You just read your paper. No one'll bother you."

With that cryptic statement, she turned, sashaying back to the counter and the line of people. It was then that Sam realized their conversation had been observed by at least ten sets of eyes. Swallowing, he offered the faces turned his way an insincere smile, then returned his attention to the newspaper.

Dean, you had better have found that fan belt or—

His internal tirade was halted abruptly as his eyes caught on the words for which he'd been scanning. Words that could offer them a purpose. Words that gave them a reason for being.

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God, he loved music.

He loved the cadence, the thrumming beat, the dance of nimble fingers on taut strings, the escape, the feelings… the fucking emotion injected into words that taken apart from the melody would be empty and hollow. Dean pressed the oversized earphones tighter against his head, drawing in the sound, letting it roll through him, churning his blood, beating his heart.

His eyes closed, Dean rocked forward to his toes, back to his heels, lost. Lost in a time long before he was a glimmer, long before he was an idea. Lost in a time when his mother was innocent and his father was a soldier. Lost in a time when the reality lurking in the dark crevasses of the world were relegated to ravings of lunatics and writings of the inspired.

Standing at the back of the small record store, walls framed with CD displays, floors covered with wooden crates of albums, ceiling papered with concert posters, Dean hummed low, uncaring who heard, uncaring who watched. There was no one in this moment but him, nothing but the magic of Page and Plant and Achilles Last Stand.

"Sending off a glancing kiss, to those who claim they know, below the streets that steam and hiss, the devil's in his hole…"

He felt a presence seconds before the hand dropped heavy on his shoulder. It took control almost beyond his measure for Dean to not squeal like a girl and jump three feet in the air. As it was, every muscle in his body tightened and released in a dizzying rush as he yanked the earphones from his head and turned with a jerk.

"Jesus Christ!"

"You're gonna go deaf!" Sam exclaimed.

"Dude!" Dean pressed a hand against his chest, recovering quickly. "Don't sneak up on me like that."

"I've been looking for you everywhere," Sam grumbled.

"Well, ease up! You found me."

"Listening to music in a tiny record store," Sam flicked his hand into the empty space between them.

"It's Achilles!"

"I don't care if it's Mozart," Sam narrowed his eyes. "It's too freakin' loud! I could hear it from the entrance, Dean."

"You're turning into an old lady, Sammy," Dean slid a bored look toward his brother and started to lift the earphones back to his head.

"Hey, hang on," Sam rested a hand on his wrist. "Did you find the garage?"

Dean nodded. "They don't open until noon." He tried to return the headphones once more.

"Wait," Sam said, pressing them back down.

"What?!" Dean grumbled impatiently. "Zeppelin just released an anthology, Sam."

Sam darted his head forward, his eyes bland. "Zeppelin? As in the same group that's been around since God was a boy?"

"An anthology, Sam," Dean repeated, slowly, sure that if he articulated, Sam would see the importance of such a monumental event.

"I think I found a job," Sam said, grabbing the earphones from Dean's hands and thrusting the newspaper in the vacant space between his fingers.

Dean's eyes mournfully followed the departure of the earphones as Babe I'm Gonna Leave You danced in a tinny echo of salty sex through the air. He sighed, watching Sam place them back on the hook for the next user, then dropped his eyes to the paper in his hand.

"PTA Approves Increase in Lunch Charges?" Dean lifted an eyebrow. "Those bastards. You're right, Sam. Grab the holy water."

Sam rolled his eyes, a motion Dean would find amusing if he didn't see it multiple times a day, and flipped the paper over. 'There," he said, stabbing a small article with his index finger.

"Local Man Sees Spooks," Dean read. He pressed his lips together, raising his eyes slowly to meet his brother's earnest gaze. "You're kidding, right?"

"Read the article, Dean," Sam frowned, stepping aside as another customer wandered through the classic rock collection of CDs.

Sighing, Dean scanned the article, lips moving rapidly as he absorbed the information. "So… he thinks his wife is haunting him, huh?"

"Yeah, and he told the cops," Sam shook his head, frowning sadly.

"Poor bastard."

"I know," Sam rested his hands loosely on his hips. "They didn't waste any time labeling him a crackpot."

"You think there's enough here to check out?" Dean kept his chin down, lifting his eyes from the paper to study Sam's face. He was staring blindly across the stacks of music, his gaze inward, thoughts translucent to the discerning eye of a knowing brother. Dean heard the quiet echo of Sam's slurred confession brought on by too many deaths and too much alcohol.

The more people I save, the more I can change…change my destiny.

"Yeah, maybe," Sam lifted a shoulder in an exaggerated shrug, forcing a look of nonchalance, radiating need so strongly Dean wanted to take a step back.

I wanted to believe...so badly that... It’s so damn hard to do this…what we do…all alone, you know? There’s so much evil out in the world, Dean, I feel like I could drown in it. And when I think about my destiny, when I think about how I could end up...

Dean nodded once, shaking free the memory of Sam's broken voice, smacking his brother lightly on the chest with the backs of his fingers. "Okay, Research Boy, go… do your thing and find out where this, uh… George Cooper lives."

Sam tilted his head, his lips curving down in an exaggerated frown. "What are you gonna do?"

Dean felt the corners of his eyes pull up as he reached for the ear phones. "Listen to some Levee, then get a fan belt for my girl."

Sam folded his lips in on a suppressed grin. "You're such a softie."

Dean settled the ear phones on his head, tapping the arrow on the CD player until the low beat of When The Levee Breaks rocked through the hiss. Raising his eyebrows at Sam, he asked silently, What are you still doing here? Sam rolled his eyes, batting at the air with a returned, You're impossible.

He turned and lumbered from the music store. Dean watched Sam pause at the door as if wanting to turn and say something, but then he pushed the door open and headed toward where they'd left the Impala. Looking down at the newspaper still clutched in his hand, Dean read the article again.

Wife of 40 years died suddenly… hears 'their song' at night… cabinet doors standing open when he left them closed… lights on when he's turned them off…

The article spoke of George Cooper with sarcasm, writing his claims off to nothing more than the lonely ravings of a widower. Dean narrowed his eyes at the last paragraph.

The Cooper's ward, a blind girl in her mid-twenties, couldn't be reached for questioning. Neighbors claim that the girl is a recluse and rarely, if ever, is seen outside of the house. She apparently came to live with the Coopers last year when her parents were killed in the same accident that blinded her.

With Zeppelin rolling through his system, Dean looked back toward the entrance, Sam's image a negative burned against the backs of his eyes. 


 

"You just got back," I protest in a stage whisper, Sam asleep with his head in my lap as Dad's black Impala rumbles across the dark road to somewhere else. "Why you gotta leave again?"

"I found something, Dean," Dad tells me, his eyes flicking up to the mirror, meeting mine, then returning to the road. "You know I have to go after it."

I lick my lips, knowing what I'm about to suggest will pull a snarl from my father, but unable to do less with Sam's body heavy against mine. "Take us to Pastor Jim's, Dad."

He looks at me in the mirror again, surprised. "What?"

"Don't stop at another motel. Take us to Pastor Jim's."

"Thought you told me you hated it there," Dad raises a brow, and I hear amusement in his voice. It triggers something in me that I recognize as anger.

"I do."

"Then why do you want to go?"

"Sam needs it," I say simply.

Dad drops his chin and I see his shoulders square. I want to say more. I want to point out that Sam hasn't slept a full night since the storm demon. I want to remind him that I had to sleep in front of the door last night. I want to tell him that I'd been scared, too. I'd been cold, too.

"Okay," he says, diffusing my anger with a simple word of agreement.

"Okay?"

Dad nods, meeting my eyes in the mirror again. "Okay," he repeats softly.

I feel myself relax against the soft leather of the rear seat, letting the arms of the only true home I knew hold me in the darkness. Dad turns on the radio and Zeppelin's soft beat fills the car with a comfortable warmth.

"Always thought this was a sexy song," Dad says softly.

"Dad," I protest, looking out through the side window into the night.

"Kissed my first girl to Kashmir," he reveals, amused, it seems, by my vocal discomfort.

Me, too, I want to say, but keep that quiet. Dad needs to know that I can clean and fire any gun he hands me. He needs to know that I can heft and balance an array of knives. He needs to know that I can take care of Sam and me for days at a time. He needs to know that I can avoid the detection of authorities.

He doesn't need to know that Kelly was the name of the blonde in fifth grade with the shy blue eyes. He doesn't need to know that Kashmir was playing from the window of the teacher's lounge when we snuck out back to taste beer she'd swiped from her mom's fridge and ended up tasting the soft, fleshy feel of each other's lips. He doesn't need to know that she cried when we left two weeks later. He doesn’t need to know that I wanted to.

"He'll outgrow it, Dean," Dad says suddenly, pulling my mind from the memory of kisses.

"Huh?"

"This sleepwalking thing," Dad says, rubbing the back of his neck in a gesture I find myself emulating. "He'll get over it."

"I know," I say, not believing him. It didn't matter to me if he outgrew it or not.

Sam was mine. And as far as I was concerned, nothing bad was going to happen to him while I was around.


Her name tag said Sadie.

Her lashes were bare and framed the dark-chocolate of her eyes like smudges of charcoal, hovering low in a sleepy stare that caught him by surprise. As the silver rings on her right hand reflected the light from the afternoon sun, Dean let his eyes absorb the way the jeans she wore hugged her curves and the white button up shirt parted to reveal a tease of cleavage. She had three freckles between her breasts that looked like an arrow. Pointing down.

"That'll be 15.47," she said, her accent clipped with the rhythm of the East coast, her cupid-bow mouth quirking as she caught his eyes lingering.

"Right," Dean pulled a twenty from his pocket, stained with the sweat from the nervous poker player he'd taken it from, and laid it on the counter, keeping his fingers on the edge of the bill until she pulled it away.

"You boys need anything else?" Sadie handed him his change, tipping her chin toward Sam waiting by the Impala, talking on his cell phone. "I mean, you are…together, right?" Her tone implied uncertainty and interest.

Dean grinned, glancing down. "Yeah," he said. He dragged his eyes up to meet hers. "He's my brother."

"Oh!" Sadie's eyes lit up, flushing her cheeks a soft red and the corner of her mouth curled back invitingly. "Well, then…"

"Dean," he supplied, tipping his chin up to shield his eyes, watching as hers took him in.

"Dean," she laughed. "I'm Sadie."

"I know," he said on a rakish smile, then with a lingering glance, turned on his heel and headed outside.

Sam's head came up at the sound of the door and he held up a hand to pause Dean's immediate questions. Dean frowned, Who is it? Sam mouthed, Bobby. Dean nodded and grabbed a pink shop towel from the backseat, then moved to the hood of the Chevy, only to realize he'd left the fan belt on the counter with Sadie.

"Dean!"

Her amused, citrus-bright voice drew his attention. He caught Sam's glance out of his periphery and dismissed the irritation he registered there.

"You forgot your belt," Sadie said, a laugh lighting up her dark eyes as she extended the belt toward him.

"So I did," Dean drawled, taking it from her slowly, letting his fingers brush hers, registering the softness of the skin there and knowing that light touch was the reason for the sudden intake of breath she tried to hide.

"You guys on your way then?" Sadie asked, her eyes falling to his mouth, then darting back up to his eyes.

Dean lifted a shoulder, glancing over at Sam as his brother clicked the cell phone closed, ending his call. "We actually thought we'd stop by and visit an old friend while we were in town."

"Oh?" Sadie shot a look at Sam, pulling her dark hair away from her face and holding it in a loose fist. "Who?"

Dean set his expression in an earnest question mark, knowing well enough that in a town the size of Lynch Heights, the girl manning the counter at the only garage in a fifty mile radius would more than likely know just about everyone.

"George Cooper," he said. "You know him?"

"You're friends of George?" Sadie said, blinking in surprise. "Oh, wow, I'm sorry."

"You're sorry?" Sam spoke up, moving around the side of the Chevy to stand next to Dean.

"Well, no, I mean," Sadie released her hair to spread her hands open, then pulled it from her mouth as the wind tossed strands across her face. "I'm sorry about Camilla. If you know George, you knew Camilla and she… man, she was a sweet, sweet lady."

On cue, Dean and Sam dropped their eyes, nodding sadly. "Shame what happened," Dean said softly.

"Yeah, well, sure she was older and all, but," Sadie pressed her lips together, "she was always so healthy."

Sam shifted his feet. Dean chewed on his bottom lip.

"A heart attack just seemed so… unexpected," Sadie supplied on a sigh.

"Yeah," the brother's answered in unison, having the information they'd been waiting for.

"At least he's not alone, though," Dean offered, feeling Sam shift beside him, taking in the fact that Dean had picked up on a silent cue. Reading his brother's signals without actually seeing him was something Dean took pride in.

Sadie's face clouded, her lips pulling close like she'd just tasted a lemon. "You mean Wren?"

Sam nodded. "She's gotta be some comfort."

Sadie looked away, working her jaw as if trying to decide the best way to break bad news. "Yeah, I suppose having another warm body around is something."

"Not a fan?" Dean hedged.

Sadie shrugged, looking back at Dean, her face closed, eyes dull with caution. "I don't have anything against her. Don't know her all that well, really."

Sam nodded while Dean watched Sadie shift her weight from one foot to the other. He wondered what she was hiding.

"Well, I won't keep you," she finally said. "Gotta get back to the counter or Hank'll have my ass."

"Can't let that happen," Dean grinned, his eyes dropping to her legs, then slowly drawing back up to her eyes.

"Um," Sadie tipped her head. "If you're gonna be around awhile, I work the evening shift at Judo's. It's basically a biker bar, but it's decent enough. Got a jukebox. Pool table…"

"Sounds like my kind of place," Dean grinned, dropping his chin and keeping his eyes on Sadie's.

"Well, good," Sadie grinned. "See you around, Dean."

"Count on it," Dean replied as she turned and jogged back to the garage, hips swaying rhythmically.

Dean tilted his head to watch her leave. "Nice."

"Seriously?" Sam pushed away from the car.

"What?" Dean asked, blinking innocently as he lifted the hood of the Impala, laying the shop towel over the grill.

"Is there like a shot they can give you or something?" Sam stood close, peering down into the engine as Dean worked the broken fan belt free.

"Hey," Dean handed the broken piece to his brother, then wiped his greasy hands on his thighs. "Do we or do we not know more about this job of yours than we did this morning."

"This job of mine?" Sam took the belt from Dean and rested his leg on the grill of the Impala. "Thought this was a family business."

Dean pulled the cardboard packaging from the new fan belt, then began to wedge it in place. "It is," he grunted, his head buried in the engine, his nose filled with the scent of grease and heat and power. "But you found this one."

Sam turned away, his reply muted by the depths of metal.

"What was that?"

"Nothing," Sam turned back to him, his voice sullen.

Dean pulled out from under the hood, one problem solved. He checked quickly, automatically, that Sam's fingers were clear, then slammed the hood shut, turning to focus on the next problem.

"You gonna be pissy or productive?" he asked, wiping his hands on the towel.

Sam frowned. "What are you talking about?"

"You have that I'm gonna argue with you no matter what tone," Dean lifted a shoulder, forcing nonchalance, acting as if he could let Sam's attitude roll free and settle in the nothing that sat between them. "Just wanted to know where you stand is all."

"What's with you?" Sam drew his brows together, his lip curling.

"Nothing," Dean pulled his head back, eyes bland, expression passive, stomach burning.

"You're acting like that damn Trickster is still… around." Sam settled his hands low on his hips, hazel eyes boring into his brother.

Dean took a breath. Then another. Sam was right. He'd been looking for a reason for them to be off-beat. Looking for a reason to want to take another swing at Sam. He wanted to not need to be so in synch with his younger brother. He wanted to see where Sam ended and he began.

And he couldn't.

Their lives had created a unity that he now depended on. And the idea that Dad could be right—that Sam's destiny was to become something Dean would have to kill to save—physically hurt him. The simple truth of it was, there was no Dean without Sam and right now, that pissed him off.

"What did Bobby want?" he asked, changing the subject.

"He was checking on us."

"He was?" Dean felt his face soften.

"Yeah. Wanted to, uh…" Sam lifted a shoulder, looking up at his brother through apologetic eyes. "Make sure we weren't killing each other."

Dean grinned ruefully. Bobby had been an adult on the fringe of their lives growing up. Just one of John's friends, a name mentioned in passing until circumstance forced them on his doorstep. He'd been Uncle Bobby for Sam, and Damn That Singer for John. He'd been watcher and watched. Protector and protected. Hunter and friend.

And Dean loved the old man simply because he answered his damn phone.

Dean took a breath. "You ready to go check out your—this—job?"

Sam stared at him a moment, assessing, weighing, thoughts bouncing off the backs of his eyes and leaving question marks in their wake. Dean watched it happen, waited for the fallout.

"How are we gonna do this one?" Sam asked, curling his fingers into fists, then releasing them in an effort to calm himself.

Dean knew next would come a subtle finger-shake, then a quick bounce on the balls of his feet. His brother's habits were as well-known to him as his own. They were something he counted on, something he leaned on, something he knew.

Even as an adult, Sam was his, and he was proud of that fact.

"You want to be Mulder or Scully?" Dean asked, his face folding back in a relaxed, sunny grin. Mask in place.

"I got a choice?" Sam asked, returning the grin.

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"Quit tugging on it."

"It's too tight."

"Hold still and I'll fix it."

"I can do it myself!"

"Well, then quit whining and do it already!"

Dean's lip curled as he met his brother's eyes in the motel mirror suspended on the wall over the wide double dresser. Sam stood behind him and to his left, deftly adjusting his tie and looking for all the world like the lawyer he'd wanted to be. His hair was slicked back, giving him a posh, serious appearance. His eyes were focused and intent. His mouth set in a grim line.

Dean pulled again on the too-tight knot of black, silky material at the base of his throat. His almost military-grade hair was fuzzy from towel-drying, and he was sweating from the weight of the suit jacket on his shoulders. He pulled a breath in through his nose, puffing it out through pursed lips, finally managing to loosen the knot and readjust the tie so that it fit snugly in his button-up white collar.

He reminded himself that he performed well under pressure. He reminded himself that lying was part of the job. He reminded himself that life was an act and the only thing that was real was standing behind him looking bored.

Turning from the mirror, Dean grabbed his .45, tucking it into his waistband. He picked up the fake IDs from the top of the dresser, having selected their cover story before returning to the motel to change into their 'costumes.' He tossed a slim black ID and badge to Sam, who caught it mid-air and slid it into his breast pocket.

Dean flipped his open, glancing at the name inside. The last time they'd used these it had been to fool Ronald Reznick into telling them about his 'Mandroid.' Poor Ron. This one has to go better than a dead believer and an agent on our asses. Sighing, Dean shoved the ID into his breast pocket, knowing he'd have to time the reveal of this false persona at the same moment as his brother.

Sam pulled on his overcoat, completing the look. He handed Dean the smaller coat, waiting patiently as Dean shrugged into it. For a brief moment, they stared at each other, tension and judgment dancing on the edges of their periphery, waiting for a chance to shove between the brothers.

Dropping his arms to his sides, Dean rolled his neck and shook his fingers out. "It's 106 miles to Chicago. We've got a full tank of gas, half a pack of cigarettes, it's dark, and we're wearing sunglasses."

He quirked his mouth, letting his best Dan Akroyd impression tumble free.

Sam licked his lips, one eyebrow bouncing in amusement. "Hit it."

Dean grinned, then turned toward the motel door, letting his chin lead his motion. "Told you I look like one of the Blues Brothers in this getup," Dean grumbled good-naturedly.

Sam pulled the motel room door shut and pocketed the keys. "Dude, no one is going to buy Paranormal FBI Agent if we show up in grease-smudged jeans and flannel shirts."

Dean glanced at him across the hood of the car. "All I'm saying is," he pulled the door open, pausing before sinking inside. "You pull off the whole suit look better."

Sam lifted a disbelieving brow. "You're just dragging your heels with this hunt."

Dean sat down, pulling the door shut, then shoved the keys in the ignition. "What if crazy is just crazy, Sam?"

"Dean, he was describing classic signs of spiritual interference."

Turning the car on, Dean frowned at the radio as The Rolling Stones' Paint It Black hummed through the car.

"He could have seen that on Ghost Hunters," Dean turned the volume down and shifted his elbow over the back of the seat to reverse from the lot.

"If you're so dead set against it," Sam turned to him, "then why are you going to see him?"

Dean faced forward once more, his eyes skimming over Sam's stubborn face as he did so. Because you believe, Sam. "I'm not dead set against it," he said, pressing the accelerator flat and gunning forward onto the road. "I just think that we should be careful is all. Not just…believe."

Mick lamented in the silence between them. Maybe then I'll fade away and not have to face the facts. It's not easy facin' up when your whole world is black…

"So… I guess that makes you the red-headed woman this time," Sam said slowly, a grin softening his accusation.

Dean barked out a surprised laugh, curling his fingers lightly around the steering wheel. "Okay, give me the skinny on George Cooper," he relented as they headed toward the Cooper residents in Slaughter Beach. "What did you find out?"

"Not much more than what the article and your girlfriend, Sadie, told us," Sam reached into the glove box and pulled out some hand-written notes he'd stuffed there just before they changed their clothes. "Camilla Cooper died of a heart attack at a church picnic about six weeks ago. George started calling the police about her ghost a couple of weeks after that."

"What did he think they were going to do?"

Sam shrugged. "Lots of people think the police are supposed to fix everything."

Dean sighed and shook his head. "What about this… blind girl?"

"Wren Demeter. Her parents were killed in some freak accident that left her with hysterical blindness."

Dean's laugh punched the air. "So… what she… cried herself blind?"

"No," Sam shook his head and glanced up. "You want to turn here. Hysterical blindness is a condition where you go blind due to a psychotic break or trauma, but with no damage to the eyes."

"So, she can really see?"

"Yeah," Sam nodded. "But she doesn't want to."

"Wonder what happened to her parents?"

"Couldn't find that out," Sam folded the paper and shoved it back in the glove box. "But George and Camilla took her in so that she didn't have to go to some home or something. Guess she didn't have any other relatives."

"Hmm," Dean chewed on his bottom lip in thought. "Sounds a little too…"

"Clean."

"Yeah."

"That's what I thought, too."

"Think Camilla's haunting someone other than George?"

"Well, from everything I could find out—go right here—George and Camilla were the perfect couple," Sam smoothed his hair back as the house came into view. "In love, devoted, no skeletons in the closet, no secrets of any kind."

"Everybody has secrets, Sam," Dean mumbled, remembering the tears in John's eyes as he leaned in close to whisper his last order into Dean's ear, remembering the cold dread that had wrapped around his own heart and shook free through his fingertips as he relayed those words to his brother. He pulled the Impala over on the side of the road opposite the house. "Okay, so… you ready to do this thing?"

"Just answer me one thing," Sam said, grabbing Dean's sleeve and halting his exit. "If this hunt hadn't been convenient… would you have done it?"

Dean frowned, watching his brother's eyes carefully. "What do you mean?"

"I mean, this ghost… the ala… we just kinda fell on them. Do you still want to…quit?"

Dean sighed, looking out through the front window at the darkening sky. Evening drew close, filtering graying light through the overhang of trees that sheltered the car and gave the house a secretive look.

"No, Sam," he said finally. "I don't want to quit. This is all I know. I just… I want you to be…" He looked over at his brother, leveling his eyes. "Safe. I'm… I'm just tired of destiny and demons and all that shit. I just want to salt and burn and… ride off into the freakin' sunset."

"You don't think I want that?"

"I don't know what you want," Dean returned, his voice even, low. "I don’t think you know what you want."

Sam pulled his lips in, looking closer to tears than Dean had seen him since Connecticut.

"So, what do we do?" Sam asked, sounding five, sounding hopeful and trusting and scared all at once.

"We cowboy up, go in there, and figure out why some old guy's dead wife is keeping him up at night." Dean let his lips pull away from his teeth, his smile hesitating before it reached his eyes. "We do the job. Just like always."

Sam nodded.

"Trust me, Sam," Dean said, reaching out and squeezing his brother's shoulder. "I won't let anything bad happen to you."

"Yeah, I know," Sam said, opening his door. "I know."

www

The house was white. Mostly. Sam could see paint peeling in large strips on the wooden boards flanking the wide front porch. The wind lazily tossed a porch swing against the side of the house, the coppery-colored rusted chains creaking quietly under the cacophony of wind chimes.

Sam shared his brother's low whistle of wonder as they slowly climbed the four worn steps leading up to the screen-covered front door. Dozens of wind chimes hung from the porch ceiling, all with a small, carved bird as the weight that bounced the tune from the wooden chimes. Some with wings spread wide, some with beaks open in a call, all dancing crazily against the hollowed-out tubes echoing a haunting melody.

"Hey, Sam," Dean said softly, drawing Sam's eyes from the ceiling.

"Yeah?"

"That tune sound…familiar to you?"

"N—" Sam stopped his protest, listening to the sound the wind teased from the wooden chimes. "Yeah… yeah, it does, kinda."

"Like something out of one of those old black and white movies."

"War movies," Sam nodded, "yeah."

"Weird." Dean shrugged, then rapped his knuckles on the wooden edge of the screen door.

When silence greeted them, Sam frowned and walked to the edge of the porch, looking at the detached garage. "No car," he reported.

"Huh," Dean walked to the other side of the porch, looking around the edge of the house, then back to Sam. "Just a garden hose."

"Want to come back?"

Dean lifted a brow. "Why would I want to do that?" he said, pulling the lock pick set from the pocket of his over coat.

Sam stood behind his brother, holding the screen door open as Dean crouched in front of the lock, checking over his shoulder for the one set of eyes that would trip them up. This used to be easier. Before Hendrickson. Before Dad. Just… before. The one thing Sam hated about this life—the solitude, the loneliness—was the one thing that had protected them.

Now, people knew about them. Exposure meant a whole different set of worries. Ones that Sam wasn't prepared to deal with. Ones that Sam would rather forget.

"Hurry up, man," Sam hissed.

The click of the lock was accompanied by Dean's glance of annoyance and they drew their guns as they stepped into the dark home, the din of the wind chimes at their backs.

"George?" Dean called, glancing to the side, then waving Sam toward the opened door leading to what appeared to be a parlor. "George Cooper? FBI. We're here to, uh… help."

No sound returned Dean's call. Sam stepped away from his brother, keeping him in his periphery, and moved through a room that hadn't been used in quite some time. He noticed a layer of dust on the tops of the tables and cobwebs lacing the pictures together. His boots were heavy on the seemingly fragile floor, creaks following in his wake as he continued through the room.

"Sam."

Dean's voice was tight, his need evident. Sam abandoned his search and turned on his heel, heading back to where he'd last seen his brother.

"What?"

"I found George," Dean was down the hall, his curved back and the heels of his boots sticking out of a doorway. Sam hurried to him, skidding to a halt when he saw his brother bent over the prone form of a silver-haired man. "He's breathing. Looks like someone clocked him a good one."

The room looked like ground zero. Glass and splinters of wood were strewn along the floor. Sam could see a few small carving knives embedded in the doorframe. Books had been pulled from shelves, lying open and torn. And as Sam bent to help Dean with George, he smelled it.

Gas.

"Dean."

"Just help me get him up—"

"Dean, we have to get out of here. Now."

"What—" Dean shot a look over his shoulder, his eyes irritated, until he saw Sam's face. His expression registered understanding and fear in one blink. "Oh, shit."

Dean turned, all action, rolling George over quickly. The older man groaned; blood from a wound on his forehead slipping into the cracks time had dug into his face. Sam stepped carefully over George's sprawled body and helped Dean set him upright.

"Wha…" George mumbled.

"We're gonna get you out of here," Dean declared.

"Wren…" George blinked, weakly lifting his head. "Get…"

Dean looked up at Sam over George's lolling head. "The girl must still be in here somewhere. Take him out."

"Dean!" Sam protested, but his words were lost as his brother stood and turned, heading further down the hall, leaving Sam with the limp, bleary-eyed widower. "C'mon, George," Sam grunted, trying to lift the older man to his feet. "Gotta get out of here."

Wait… wait for Dean… Sam's heart screamed at him as George's weight filled his arms. He slid the man's hand over his shoulder and stared from the chaotic room. As they stepped into the hall, Sam hazarded a look to his left, hoping to see Dean.

"Wren…" George groaned.

"Dean's getting her," Sam assured the wounded man. "C'mon…"

He half-dragged, half-carried George down the now-chilly hall. As they reached the end, just before the opened front door, Sam saw a digital wall thermostat, looking utterly out of place in the centuries-old house.

His eyes caught and registered the temperature just as the digital read-out clicked. Seventy-one. Automatically, he looked at the gauge. It was set to seventy-two.

Oh, shit…

"Dean!"

Sam knew that the second the furnace kicked on, it would trigger the gas filling the interior of the house like a bomb, taking everyone and everything in its wake along for a very hot ride. George sagged in his arms. Sam shot another look over his shoulder, panic turning his stomach to ice and slamming his heart against his ribs. His legs felt watery as he stalled in the doorway between safety and savior.

"DEAN!"

When he received no answering call from his brother, Sam considered for one brief second dropping George where he stood and heading back inside.

"Son of a bitch," he growled, teeth clenched tight, as the instinct to protect pulled him outside with his cargo. Stumbling down the steps, the wind chimes teasing him with a barely remembered tune, Sam hastened to the edge of the yard and dropped George groggily on his backside. "Stay there."

"Who—who are you?" George peered up at him.

Sam didn't wait around to explain. He turned, heading back to the house at a run.

The explosion slammed through the air, slapping Sam with heat, tossing him off of his feet and depositing him on his back near George.

Sam blinked blindly at the evening sky, the silver grin of the moon canceled out by blurry pain. His eyes watered, his lungs bleated for release. He tried to pull in air, but it was as if his chest cavity had been turned paper thin. He felt a hand on his wrist, shaking his arm.

The gasp of air he was finally able to pull in was littered with ash and debris. He rolled weakly to his side, trying desperately to draw in a breath as a clumsy hand pounded his back.

"…the hell happened, kid?"

"What?"

"You okay?"

Sam blinked at the red-rimmed blue eyes staring down at him, firelight flickering oddly-shaped shadows across the face.

"What?" he asked again.

"My house just blew up," George said, voice dazed, as he sat back on his heels, his hand still resting on Sam's back. "Oh, God… Wren…"

"Dean," Sam gasped, pushing himself to his knees. The world rushed around him, blood like voices pounding his ears. He swayed dizzily.

"Easy, kid," George's hand rested heavier on Sam. "You're in no shape—"

"Get the hell off me," Sam growled, his voice a deep rasp, anger and fear turning it into one much older, one that had seen more than its share of tragedy. "My brother's in there."

Struggling out of his cumbersome overcoat, Sam staggered to his feet, unable to maintain his balance. He walked in an exaggerated diagonal line toward the ruined house. The explosion had blown out most of the fire, leaving behind a smoking rubble with sparks of flame peppering the foundation. The front door was gone, the parlor reduced to a pile of wood beams and broken furniture.

The back of the house seemed relatively intact, and Sam could see the gutted second floor framed in the orange light from the dying fires.

"DEAN!"

Groans of wood and crackles of flames met his ears. He stumbled forward into a surreal landscape of splinters and smoke, falling debris and littering paper.

No… no no no no… Sam staggered. Not like this… not this way… you're supposed to watch out for me… you're supposed to stay…

"DEAN! Answer me!"

Sam coughed as he lurched over a broken table, pushing shards of a papered wall out of the way. Please please please…

"Dean! C'mon, man… Answer me!"

Sam coughed again, tripping, catching himself, driving a splinter deep into his palm. The stab of pain was instant and fierce, causing a sour taste to gather at the back of his throat. He went to his knees with a cry of surprise, grabbing his right hand in his left and hissing with the pain of the intrusion of wood. He blinked burning eyes, feeling tears spill over the edge of his lashes.

It was then he saw the glimmer of silver. A silver ring shining in the wan firelight. A silver ring on the right hand of his brother. A hand that hung limply over a beam of wood.

Dean's hand.

"Oh, God…"

Sam surged forward, his eyes pinned to his brother's hand.

"I'm here… I’m here, Dean. I'm gonna get you out. You just wait, okay. You wait for me."

Sam's hands shook as he started to unbury his brother. His legs seemed to disappear from the knees down, supporting him by will alone. His stomach twisted and his heart pounded and his lungs refused to function normally. He panted with stubborn panic, his body moving, his mind screaming, blood beating so loudly in his ears that he wanted to cover them.

Fear gripped him more completely than when he'd watched the doctors shock his brother back to life. More completely than when he'd found his father sprawled on the floor.

"I'm here, Dean," he gasped with the effort it took to lift another board. He saw the rest of Dean then, face-down, overcoat twisted around him, one arm tucked under him, the other flung out as if he fell reaching.

"Oh shit, oh shit, oh shit," Sam panted, not hearing his own voice, not realizing he was even speaking. He reached a trembling hand for Dean's neck, holding his breath. The steady thrum of his brother's pulse left him dizzy with relief.

"Okay, okay, I can do this," he told himself. "I can do this."

One ceiling beam, darkened with heat from the blast, lay across Dean's body, kept from crushing him by the edge of a parlor chair. Sam took a breath, folded his lips against his teeth, and with a guttural grunt of effort, pushed the beam aside, leaving Dean exposed.

Taking another deep breath, Sam stepped around the wreckage, kneeling close to his brother. Logic told him not to move Dean. Need canceled logic and he reached for his brother's shoulders. Carefully, his inhale captured in the caverns of his lungs, Sam rolled Dean over, cradling his brother's limp body in the crook of his arms.

Blood trailed from the corner of Dean's mouth, his nose, and a deep cut across his forehead and one cheek. Sam could feel it matting the hair at his left temple, and it darkened his neck where it ran freely from his ears.

"Oh, Jesus," Sam whispered, easing Dean's inert body against him, his thumb brushing carefully at the blood coming from Dean's ears. "Oh, God, Dean."

"Kid?"

Sam looked up, sniffing, tasting the salt of his own tears on the edges of his lips. George stood in the remnants of his front porch, a beautiful, young girl standing next to him.

"I used the neighbor's phone. Ambulance is on its way," George pulled the girl close to him. She lifted blank, china-blue eyes and Sam caught his breath. "I found Wren," George said simply.

The girl must still be in here somewhere… Sam caught his breath in a stuttered sob as he looked at Wren's unlined, porcelain face staring innocently back at him. Dark hair framed her face like wings and her small mouth was parted in what looked like a gasp. He went back after you, Sam wanted to say. But he could only stare at her.

Wrenching his gaze from Wren's eyes, Sam looked down at the blood covering Dean's face, using his splinter-impaled, trembling hand to wipe it from the hollows of his brother's eyes. He ended up simply blending their blood, smearing the sticky substance across Dean's cheek and darkening his brother's hair with his trembling strokes of attempted reassurance.

"Is he…" George hedged as the wail of the ambulance siren split the night.

"He's alive," Sam said, his voice thin, his breath stuttering. "He's alive."

Wait for me, Dean…

Sam felt the world roll around him. He felt the fine spray as the water from the firemen's hose blew at him on the wind. He felt the hands of the EMTs try to ease him away from his brother. He felt the arms pull Dean's limp body up. He felt the darkness close in, sucking the air from inside of him and ejecting it into the night.

He felt empty, hollow, and alone as he slipped quietly into oblivion, sagging into the arms of a stranger as his brother was taken from him.

Wait for me…


a/n: If I do this right, this should be a rather angsty story. If you come back, I hope you enjoy! Thanks for coming this far…

Playlist:

Crazy Circles by Bad Company

Please by Staind (because I am in love with Aaron Lewis' voice…)

Overfloater by Soundgarden

Achilles Last Stand, Babe I'm Gonna Leave You, When the Levee Breaks (that's for you, SJ), Kashmir by the one and only Led Zeppelin

Paint It Black by The Rolling Stones

Part Two (A and B) can be found here: http://gaelicspirit.livejournal.com/15369.html

Comments

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novembersguest
Jun. 19th, 2008 11:07 pm (UTC)
Yay, it's here!!! Wish I had time to read it RIGHT NOW, but as I said, I've gotta get ready for son's game tonight.At least I have a treat waiting for me later :D. Can't wait. Hope you all are having a great time!!!
gaelicspirit
Jun. 26th, 2008 05:30 pm (UTC)
Hey you -- well, because I got tangled up in ending the vacation and catching up with work, I am just getting to this. I'm glad you feel it's a treat to read when you have time. :)

I hope you enjoy what you read!! I'm working on chapter 2...

*hugs*
lsketch42
Jun. 19th, 2008 11:20 pm (UTC)
GAHHHHHHHHHHHH!

How could you do that??? How could you leave me hangin' with Hurt!Dean???

You fanfic writers...such sadists *angry eyes*

Okay, I forgive you. Awesome so far, as always m'dear. Just please post again soon because I need me some serious Samcomfortin ;)

By the way, I have no idea why, but I absolutely loved this line..."And Dean loved the old man simply because he answered his damn phone." Oh Dean *squishes him*

gmys
Jun. 19th, 2008 11:24 pm (UTC)
Squeals! my goodness your back with a bang! I just absolutely love your stories... was so excited to see a new one. Never am disappointed. Love love love it... Poor Dean *cries* poor Sam... actually poor me, I will be sitting on the edge until your next update. Thank you!

Geena
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kj_svala
Jun. 19th, 2008 11:26 pm (UTC)
weeeee, a new story, awesome. Saved this to read later.

I need to tell you, I`m a fan of yours, yup.

I`m so happy to see your name at LJ. I`m currently reading "In the light" and I LOVE what I read so far. Saved "Ramble On" also to read after "In the Light" as soon as I found it. I love your style, and storytelling *g*
gaelicspirit
Jun. 26th, 2008 05:42 pm (UTC)
LOVE your avatar -- what a great smile.

I am so pleased you're enjoying the stories, and I look forward to your thoughts! I giggled, though, because you're reading the sequel to Ramble On first. :) So, there's some backstory to Abe that you'll get when you read Ramble On.

I truly hope you enjoy the stories and I hope to hear back from you!

Gaelic
art_savage
Jun. 19th, 2008 11:42 pm (UTC)
Man, this hit the spot after a crappy day at work - I'm sure there's some first-rate hurt!Dean in store. Loved the details in this first part. Sam's quirk of hating his feet was especially delightful.

Looking forward to the next chapter!
gaelicspirit
Jun. 26th, 2008 05:53 pm (UTC)
awww... so sorry for the crappy day. I full-on hear you. Returning from vacation always makes me wonder if vacation is actually worth it.

I'm glad you liked the feet quirk. I have a friend who is like that and thought it worked for Sam. He seems like one of those guys that is more self-conscious of his body.

Hope you enjoy the next chapter!
jennierenee
Jun. 20th, 2008 12:28 am (UTC)
You? Writing something angsty? Nooooo. I love it so far. I felt so bad for kid Dean when he was thinking about how scared he was too. And now poor Sammy. He found the hunt and he made it out of the house. I'm thinking he's going to need a hug. Hope you're having fun in San Diego!
gaelicspirit
Jun. 26th, 2008 05:55 pm (UTC)
Thanks! We did have a good time, though, traveling with a toddler is NEVER relaxing...

Hee, yeah, I do lean a bit toward the angsty. Someone asked me if I'd write a humor piece for a zine and I literally froze. I don't know how to do funny -- unless it just comes out in a dialog conversation.

I really hope you like the next chapter. And yeah, Sammy needs a hug... but he's not going to get one for awhile.

GS
aussiemel1
Jun. 20th, 2008 02:32 am (UTC)
Oooh angsty is good.

Thrilled you've started a new story. And what a start. Both boys already under the weather.

Looking forward to more.
gaelicspirit
Jun. 26th, 2008 05:58 pm (UTC)
Hooray!! Man, I love that grin...

Thanks so much for reading and taking time to leave me feedback. I really appreciate it!!

Hope you like what's to come.

GS
almightyspaz
Jun. 20th, 2008 03:02 am (UTC)
Holy shit, This kicks some serious ass.
gaelicspirit
Jun. 26th, 2008 06:07 pm (UTC)
Rock on! I'm so glad you like it!!

GS
lomer
Jun. 20th, 2008 04:15 am (UTC)
I love how the boy's dialogue is so spot on. You can tell they love each other, but they banter like brothers. And you've given us quite a cliffhanger so I can't wait for the next chapter! Thanks for writing. *g*
gaelicspirit
Jun. 26th, 2008 06:00 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much for the dialog compliment! I'm pleased you are enjoying it, and I really hope you enjoy what's to come -- hope to post by the 3rd. :)

GS
erinrua
Jun. 20th, 2008 05:22 am (UTC)
You wanted tactile? You have achieved tactile. ;-)

This is absolutely stunning. I dearly hope you'll pursue this story to its finish, as it would break my heart to be hooked this thoroughly and not see its end. :-) Next, please - soon, I hope!
Cheers ~

Erin
gaelicspirit
Jun. 26th, 2008 06:02 pm (UTC)
*grins big*

Thank you so much! And please, don't worry. I have never started a story and not finished it. And I rarely write more than one story at the same time -- I've only done that before when I was either co-writing or writing for the VS.

I'm really pleased that you're enjoying this and I thank you for reading!
GS
llywela13
Jun. 20th, 2008 05:45 am (UTC)
Hi. It's great to see you posting a new story - season 2 h/c is just what we need after the trauma of the S3 finale!

And Dean loved the old man simply because he answered his damn phone.
I loved this line. It says so much.

This used to be easier. Before Hendrickson. Before Dad. Just… before. The one thing Sam hated about this life—the solitude, the loneliness—was the one thing that had protected them. Now, people knew about them. Exposure meant a whole different set of worries. Ones that Sam wasn't prepared to deal with. Ones that Sam would rather forget.
And this bit, ditto. You have great insight into the intricacies of the show and its dynamics.
gaelicspirit
Jun. 26th, 2008 06:05 pm (UTC)
Hi! Thanks so much!! I'm really pleased that you're reading. I am flattered that you think I have some insight. I'm just writing the movie in my mind; the fact that it resonates with you is thrilling.

Hope you enjoy what's to come.

GS
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magnolialane
Jun. 20th, 2008 02:46 pm (UTC)
I got so excited when I saw you had posted this. And then I read it - holy crap! You've got weechesters, H/C in spades, angsty boys, and plenty of hurt!Dean in there and it's only the first chapter.

This got me: Logic told him not to move Dean. Need canceled logic and he reached for his brother's shoulders. Carefully, his inhale captured in the caverns of his lungs, Sam rolled Dean over, cradling his brother's limp body in the crook of his arms.

You said you were going for tactile - and I think that's exactly what you've done. You've captured every sense and added a richness that makes the words jump off the page. I don't know how you did that, but it was such a pleasure to devour every word.

And how giddy did I get when I found you had set it in Delaware! Though I did have to chuckle when I read this: Dean set his expression in an earnest question mark, knowing well enough that in a town the size of Lynch Heights, the girl manning the counter at the only garage in a fifty mile radius would more than likely know just about everyone. The state is only a hundred miles long in total :) But you get major props for mentioning Lynch Heights and Slaughter Beach (which is more of a rock strewn meeting of land and bay than a beach). I've always thought Slaughter Beach, the Murderkill River, and Broadkill Beach would be good places for the boys to visit.
gaelicspirit
Jun. 26th, 2008 06:12 pm (UTC)
Hey! I Delaware native! :) How great! :) Thanks for that -- I try to get some kind of reality in stories and always choose a real place, trying to describe it as best I can if I haven't been there myself. SO... no harm or insult meant to Delawarians.:)

I am so happy you're reading and that you are enjoying. It's very fulfilling to know that the story entertains you. I'm working on the 2nd part now and really hope you enjoy it!

Best to you,
Gaelic
neviditelny
Jun. 20th, 2008 04:38 pm (UTC)
Very cool. Can't wait for more!
gaelicspirit
Jun. 26th, 2008 06:12 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I hope you enjoy the next part -- thanks for taking time to drop me a comment. :)

GS
leenys
Jun. 20th, 2008 06:41 pm (UTC)
Okay, first. . .major points for: Dropping his arms to his sides, Dean rolled his neck and shook his fingers out. "It's 106 miles to Chicago. We've got a full tank of gas, half a pack of cigarettes, it's dark, and we're wearing sunglasses.

Cause I just howled when I read that!

Second, I want you to be my fanfic best friend. All your stories rock beyond belief, and this one is no exception! Yours are the fics I most look forward to.

Kam :D
gaelicspirit
Jun. 26th, 2008 06:17 pm (UTC)
Man, there is nothing like movie quoting Dean. I knew I could pull that off when I heard him quote Ghostbusters in the finale. :) Hee.

I like having fanfic best friends. :) Thanks for that. I'm really pleased you are enjoying this and I hope you like what's to come!!

GS
apieceofcake
Jun. 20th, 2008 11:17 pm (UTC)
So good to see another story from you :-)

Great start, looking forward to more angst & h/c!
gaelicspirit
Jun. 26th, 2008 06:20 pm (UTC)
Thank you! I really appreciate you reading and taking time to comment. :)

Hope you enjoy what's to come.

GS
kjfri
Jun. 23rd, 2008 12:02 am (UTC)
yikes! Cliffhanger hurt-Dean!! Please don't make us wait too long for the next installment!! I've been a longtime fan of yours so excited for this new one!
gaelicspirit
Jun. 26th, 2008 06:21 pm (UTC)
Thanks so much for letting me know you've been a fan. I am blushing to hear that. But very happy.

I promise to not make you wait longer than 2 weeks between posts. Working on the 2nd part now, and I hope you enjoy!

GS
roweenac
Jun. 23rd, 2008 12:33 pm (UTC)
Alright. Now. This chapter screams and begs for an extra long review. Shit. Don't have the bloody time to do it. Just a few notes then. Hope you'll be okay with that!

First of all, thank you for all the good music in this story so far. LedZep rock. And you put my all time favs in here (Levee and Kashmir), can't thank you enough...

Sexy song = Kashmir. Damn right. And such a long long long sexy song. Listen to it while driving to work every day, on repeat.

Now... I think I know what's gonna happen to poor Dean, you evil woman! He'll be deaf ("You're gonna go deaf!" and of course the tell-tale title "Hear no Evil"). I got you! Hm. It'll be hell for him. Not being able to hear his music, to allow music to speak about his emotions. He'll be trapped inside his own body with no way to vent his feelings. But there is one last hope. Led Zeppelin's strong beats will help him. They must be "audible" in a way, resonating in his bones or something. Maybe even the other bands (Metallica or AC/DC).

Uhm. OK. It's a wild guess, that deaf-Dean-thing. But I would love it. See how the brothers cope with that.
Cant't wait to read the next part. Hopefully, you post until 25th. *beggs batting lashes* Otherwise I have to wait two friggin' weeks to continue.

Hugs ya
Ilka/RoweenaC
gaelicspirit
Jun. 26th, 2008 06:29 pm (UTC)
Not so wild... *grin*

Thanks for reading, girl -- and for the review! No worries whatsoever on length. I see reviews as a gift, and this present from you is much appreciated.

I'm pleased you're enjoying and I hope you have a FABULOUS time in the UK. Come back refreshed and I'll have the next chapter waiting for you. :)

GS
valkrys
Jun. 24th, 2008 12:25 pm (UTC)
*sigh*

And you do it again. This is already an unfair cliffhanger. Maybe I should wait until you've finished posting all parts.... Yeah, right.

I'm definitely hooked. And as always, I love your John, even if he's only mentioned briefly. Your characterization of the boys is spot on and I NEED to know how this whole thing turns out!! Like, right now!

Can't wait for more!
gaelicspirit
Jun. 26th, 2008 06:30 pm (UTC)
Sorry for the cliffie... kinda. I'm REALLY glad you're hooked, though. Really. Thank you so much for reading and for taking time to offer me feedback. I am very pleased you like John. He'll be appearing in memories throughout, so I hope I continue to do him justice. :)

Thanks again for reading and I hope you enjoy what's to come!

GS
kultiras
Jun. 30th, 2008 04:52 pm (UTC)
I finally got a chance to sit down and read this, and it was fantastic. I knew I wouldn't be disappointed, because it's one of your stories, but I don't think I've fallen for a story this quickly since I read Ramble On.

Like that story, I love the use of flashbacks to show the difference in perspectives between the brothers now and when they were young.

I'm already intrigued by the story, largely because of the flashbacks, but also because of Wren, and the explosion, and even the ala from the beginning of the story.

And of course like any respectable Dean!girl, I loved the scene with Dean in the music store. ;)

All of this is a way of saying despite the fact that Dean is unconscious, I can't wait to read more!
gaelicspirit
Jul. 2nd, 2008 09:06 pm (UTC)
Hey! Thanks SO much for reading and taking time to leave me feedback. I'm very pleased you like the flashbacks and plan on using them throughout the story to spell Dean state of mind.

I've been working on chapter 2 and want very much to have it up by this week, but life has thrown up roadblocks for both myself and my beta. I'm working on it, though! I really hope you enjoy how the story unfolds.

Thanks again for your time and the gift of your review.

GS
looselyspeaking
Jul. 13th, 2008 08:46 am (UTC)
A pleasingly comfortable start to this. Dean getting a bit of down time in the record shop and then checking out the girl at the garage. Bit of a busmans holiday for him. :wink:

But, it didn't last long. Love the movie quote and the seemingly innocent ghosting is now hinting at something not quite so nice as we have barely any house left and Dean in a very poorly condition.

On a side I love Paint it Black. (My boy has this XBox360 guitar game and it's on there, and I've been doing my rock chick thing with the guitar and that song, well kinda, I'm more a pop girl so it's a slid-pop-rock-chick-thing...!!)

Back to the fic. Wren, hmm, she that can't see yet Sam's description of her is that her mouth is open, almost like a gasp and she appears to be staring at him. What's the backstory on her I wonder. Is she evil incarnate picking on the poor old man or an innocent red herring of Gaelic's. LOL. Guess I will just have to read on.

And Dean, ack our boy, that ending fed my h/c side most satisfactorily thank you. And Sam unable to hold it together was a very delicious angsty side dish.

Just reading other peeps comments and see the one from a Delaware resident and seriously, does this place have all these death related names, or is that a wind up? Will have to go Google Earth and check it out.*g

Jane :)
(Anonymous)
Jul. 25th, 2008 03:26 am (UTC)
Hear No Evil - Part One
Hey Gaelic,
So, finally here are my thoughts about your latest offerings!
- As ever, your descriptions are so detailed, the Ala scene, the rain, Dean lighting the arrow. I could feel the burn of his thighs as he gripped the obelisk.
- It is the small details that make your writing so special - Sam hating his feet, the callus below Deans ring. I remember getting one on my hand after getting my engagement ring, I never used to wear jewellery, and it really bothered me for a while.
- "You look like someone about to be wakling", that is so Dean!
- Interesting backstory entwined with this, I am interested to see where you are going.
- Sadie - Possibly Deans ideal woman - working in a garage!! Is she a love interest?
- Dean, ever the hero, staying in the house to look for Wren.
- And the cliffhange ending. Gaelic, you really know how to do it to us!!

You know I love your writing style - so realistic, images of every scene run through my head as I am reading, I can hear every work and feel every emotion. Don't worry about writing and re-writing. You can tell that the words just flood from your brain to the pen (actually, does anyone even use pens anymore!!). It's like when you sit exams, what you write first is always the best, don't go back and start second guessing yourself.

Love it!! Have to go and see what the puppy is up to downstairs, he's supposed to be sleeping but can hear distinctly awake noises which can't be good - he's probably chewing the cushions again!!

Stella
gaelicspirit
Aug. 2nd, 2008 07:09 pm (UTC)
Re: Hear No Evil - Part One
Stella!!!

I was so happy to see this -- and to see you reviewed both parts if the beginning of this story. Yay!! Hope that puppy isn't giving you too much trouble. I remember when Josie was a puppy she once ate an entire couch over the course of a week due to separation anxiety. I'm dead serious.

I hope you continue to enjoy the story! Sadie is involved later, but as far as a permanent love interest, there's only one character in my bag of tricks for that.

I'm really pleased you're enjoying the sense of the story. I'm working throughout the whole thing to try to make this story tangible.

Thanks again!!

Gaelic
(Anonymous)
Jul. 28th, 2008 04:40 am (UTC)
Now THAT'S what I call an opening chapter! I'm in.
gaelicspirit
Aug. 2nd, 2008 06:50 pm (UTC)
Fantastic! Thanks for the feedback and I hope to hear from you again.

Gaelic
txgirl0302
Aug. 14th, 2010 09:11 am (UTC)
Why did I start this now? LOL. Gonna finish this one tomorrow.

By the way I LOVE that you are a Staind fan. I've seen that you use lyrics from their songs in a few other fics. I absolutely love Aaron Lewis. *High five*
gaelicspirit
Aug. 14th, 2010 01:01 pm (UTC)
*high-fives* Back atcha! Right on, fellow Staind fan!! I was lucky enough to get to see Aaron play a solo show in Kansas City last year -- AMAZING.

Thanks for letting me know you're reading this one. I really enjoyed writing it and I hope you have a good time with it, too.

Take care of you!

Gaelic
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